Guardian Angel Joan color

First off, lemme just say that it's great to see fanart of some lesser-known cards. A few people I know have a soft spot for either St. Joan, Guardian Angel Joan, or both; it's great to see more art of her! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />

Props: Wow. You were REALLY attentive to the detail on the card! I love the wings (had to be said!) and ribbons can be a real bitch to draw properly. They're very precise and detailed; most artists probably would have skipped something on them.

Slops: As another poster said, the pose looks...posed. I saw that someone nitpicked that the head was too small; it's hard to get head sizes right, so I'll cut you a little bit of slack on that. The hand and arm positionings, however, do truly look...fake. Be especially careful with the digit arrangement; it seems off in this pic.

Also, maybe this is just me (in fact, it probably is), but one of the ribbons looks almost blown to the side. Something irks me about that; maybe it's because it makes that one end of ribbon look longer, or maybe it's because, if there's wind, we should see more effects of it.

Other little nitpicks: This would have looked REALLY nice with some sort of background. As it is, the white clothing of the figure blends in with the background; on the card, simple yellow-gold was used to set the white maiden apart. It was also especially cool that, on the card, her wings did blend in; not using a BG kinda detracts from that effect.

Well, that's all from me! Peace! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Peace" />